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Lesson 4 of 5
Technology & Privacy
Core 60 min
Pathway
Lesson 2.4 introduces the Task 2 discussion essay using technology and privacy as the topic.
What you'll be able to do
- Plan a balanced discussion essay in 4 paragraphs
- Use linking devices for cohesion
- Conclude with a clear personal view
Get Ready
Get Ready · Privacy and tech
- What data do apps collect about you?
- Is sharing data a fair price for free services?
Writing Task
Framework · Discussion essay
Discuss both views + give your opinion
01
Intro
Paraphrase + outline both sides + state your view.
02
Body 1
View A — reason + example.
03
Body 2
View B — reason + example.
04
Conclusion
Restate your view + final thought.
On the one hand …
introduce one side
On the other hand …
introduce the opposing side
Proponents argue that …
supporters' view
Critics maintain that …
opposing view
In my view …
your opinion
Writing Task
Writing · Sample prompt
Example · Prompt
Some people believe that companies should be free to collect personal data in exchange for free online services. Others feel that this represents a serious threat to privacy. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sample introduction
Paraphrase
The exchange of personal data for free digital services has become a defining feature of modern internet use.
Outline
While some regard this as a fair and necessary trade-off, others view it as a fundamental erosion of privacy.
Position
In my view, the practice is acceptable only when users are given meaningful control over what is collected.
Writing Task
Pathway focus · Academic essay register
Academic essays reward nominalisation and precise hedging.
Conversational
- Lots of people think tech companies are bad.
- It's a really big problem these days.
Academic
- A growing number of commentators question the conduct of technology firms.
- This has emerged as a pressing contemporary issue.
Exam Strategy
Exam Strategy
- Exam Tip
Plan 4 paragraphs in 4 minutes before you write.
- Exam Tip
One clear opinion — repeat it in intro and conclusion.
Independent Practice
Independent Practice
Plan only
Spend 10 minutes planning a different discussion prompt.
Write to time
40 minutes — full Task 2 on the sample prompt.
Key Takeaways
Key Takeaways
Remember
- Discussion essays need both sides — never just one.
- Cohesion comes from linkers AND repeated key nouns.
When you're done, mark this lesson complete.