Essay language upgrade

Improve the sentence. Keep the meaning; raise the register and precision.

1. 1

   Upgrade: 'A lot of people think this is bad.'

2. 2

   Upgrade: 'This will definitely solve the problem.'

3. 3

   Upgrade: 'Firstly... Secondly... Finally...' overused. Rewrite the second linker in: 'Firstly, costs fall. Secondly, jobs increase.'

4. 4

   Upgrade: 'Nowadays, technology is very important in our daily life.'

5. 5

   Which is appropriately hedged for Task 2?

   There is considerable evidence that pollution contributes to premature death.Everyone knows that pollution kills.
6. 6

   Which conclusion is stronger?

   In conclusion, I have discussed both views and I think it's clear.In conclusion, while road investment remains necessary, funding public transport delivers greater long-term benefit.