Module 7 · Unit 7 — Cities, Housing & Urban Life
Designing Better Cities
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Lesson 4 of 5

Designing Better Cities

Core 60 min
Pathway

Lesson 7.4 builds the Task 2 opinion essay with strong cohesion devices that lift scripts from Band 6 to Band 7.

What you'll be able to do
  • Plan a 4-paragraph opinion essay
  • Use 6 cohesion devices accurately
  • Defend an opinion with relevant examples
Listening Skills

Listening Skills — A Tutorial on Designing Better Cities

Before you listen

You will hear a tutor and a student discussing an urban design project. Read the statements first and decide what kind of information would confirm or contradict each one.

  • Remember NOT GIVEN means the information simply isn't mentioned, not that it's wrong.
  • Listen for the student correcting a figure — the correction usually gives the true answer.
  • Do not assume a statement is true just because a similar topic is mentioned.
  • Compare the exact wording of each statement with what is actually said.
Example · New Zealand English · Tutor and Student

Listen first — the transcript stays hidden so this works like the real exam.

Listening audio

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Instruction

Do the following statements agree with the information given in the tutorial? Write TRUE, FALSE or NOT GIVEN.

  1. The main design goal of the Harbourside Renewal Project was to reduce car dependency.
  2. Before redevelopment, more than half of trips into the district were made by car.
  3. The shuttle bus connecting the waterfront to the train station charges a small fare.
  4. The city has announced plans to extend the cycle path network further.
  5. Car trips dropped to around twenty-five per cent of all trips within three years.
  6. Most shop owners reported higher sales two years after the changes.
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Answer key

Writing Task

Today's Task 2 prompt

Example · Prompt

Some people believe that city planners should focus on building more housing. Others argue that priority should be given to improving public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Writing Task

Plan · 4 paragraphs

Discuss both views + opinion
Intro
Paraphrase + state your own opinion clearly.
Body 1
View A (housing) — explain + give one example.
Body 2
View B (transport) + your opinion with reasoning.
Conclusion
Restate your view in one developed sentence.
Focus

Cohesion · Band 7 devices

Admittedly, …
linker
concede a point
Nevertheless, …
linker
concede then push back
By the same token, …
linker
add a parallel point
What is more, …
linker
add a stronger point
In essence, …
linker
summarise
this means that …
linker
interpret your evidence
Cohesion in a body paragraph
Band 6 · Competent
  • 'Building houses is important. Also, transport is important. So, the government should do both.'
Band 7 · Good
  • 'Admittedly, building more homes addresses an immediate need. Nevertheless, without parallel investment in transport, those new residents quickly add to congestion — which is why a coordinated approach makes more sense.'
Focus

Pathway focus · Academic register check

Replace 'a lot of' with 'considerable', 'big problem' with 'significant challenge', and 'good' with 'beneficial'.

Exam Strategy

Exam Strategy

  • Exam Tip

    Put your opinion in the intro AND the conclusion — never wait until the end.

Independent Practice

Independent Practice

Timed essay

Write the full 250 words in 40 minutes.

Key Takeaways

Key Takeaways

Remember
  • Cohesion = how ideas connect, not just linking words.
  • Discuss-both-views requires BOTH sides + your view.
When you're done, mark this lesson complete.